It is a very lovely and well detailed picture, but i think the pose looks that little bit too awards. I think mainly it seems her legs don't connect to the body quite right especailly the one of the right of the picture, because that doesn't look like it is connected to the body, it is hard to judge what the other is doing.
Love the Dragon-Girl! Is there precedent for that? Forgive my ignorance. Yes, everything about this is superb - like the edge light on the figures and the feeling of movement and excellent composition.